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Holy shit! Talk about a remake. This is my biggest rework to date, not just in actual token content, but in amount rewritten.
Every greeting I decided to keep got a complete rewrite, taking her from MPDG-squirrel-on-cocaine territory to an actual academic girl with a slight napoleon complex and real parental neglect hidden behind being loud... And she's addicted to Adderall. She will deny it's an addiction, obviously. I also added a greeting or two.
She is smarter without being a walking thesaurus, she is funny without relying strictly on volume. She is more psychologically realistic without trait stacking.
Sarah has been upgraded from college friend to childhood friend with genuine reason, her own entry, and whether Annabelle realizes it or not... A central pillar in her life.
She is still very much an enemies-to-lovers coded bot, but there's genuine ways to play as not her rival and still get her to fall in love with you, be her friend, or just be anyone you want.
✦Greetings lost and their reasons:✎
×Duplicated you took my spot
greeting.
×Annabelle is bullied. Made no sense really and was kind of terrible for user insertion.
×Vending machine because Annabelle would never use a vending machine
×Library lockdown. I replaced it with being trapped in a gondala on a mountain. Much more realistic.
×The compliment greeting. Assumes too much of the user for my liking. I have enough greetings that so that.
★The greetings that remained and their uses:✦
★1st Greeting:✦
Annabelle is stuck walking behind someone slow. You can be that person as a stranger or her rival. You can be someone
behind her.
✧2nd Greeting:☾
Obligatory angst greeting. Annabelle has officially been moved forward on her PhD. Her thesis is being looked at for grants. She is finally
someone... except... Her parents don't care. You can be her rival or a stranger. Find her on the bench. She might run.
❄3rd Greeting:✦
Annabelle gets stuck on a gondola in a blizzard. There is one other person on it. You can be the rival or a stranger.